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Short story that I am working on
Friday. 6.1.07 11:25 am
She woke up to the sunlight streaming on her face. She tried to remember what happened to her, but couldn’t. Where was she? Where was her family? Then she tried to picture her mother and then realized that she didn’t recall what her mother looked like. Then, she realized that no matter how hard she tried, she could not even remember her own name or age. She had no idea who she was.

The door opened and in walked a nurse. She was in some kind of hospital. The IV was hooked up to her and she really needed a bath.
“Ah, you are finally awake,”
She nodded then asked, “What happened to me?”
“You do not remember?”
“No, ma’am, I don’t”
“You may have amnesia. Tell me, what is your name and what year is it?”
. Surely she knew her own name! But she couldn’t get past the fog in her mind,”
“I-I can’t” tears started flowing, “I don’t know,” she whispered. She started trembling.
The nurse gently soothed her.
“. Your name is Leah Soileau and you have no children. You were born in Bossier City , LA , though you chose to attend school in 2004 in Atlanta , GA. You lost your parents to Katrina in 2005 after they moved to New Orleans . You in the mall when there was an armed robbery.. You took two bullets in the head, yet survived it. Then there was the fire. Only one of your friends survived and she is here in the city as well,”
“So I am in Atlanta ,” Leah, now knowing her own name murmured, trying to remember the events as the nurse just spoken.
“No, you are in your home in Bossier.. Colonel Arrington lost his family in the mall and wanted to save you and Clarisse. You are actually at Barksdale Air Force Base.,”
Leah struggled to take all of this in. A bombing, shopping at the mall, and being home in a place where she has no memory.
“Rest now and the doctor will see you later,” The kind nurse, whose grandmotherly presence that Leah felt attached to all of a sudden, left. Leah instantly fell back to sleep hoping she would wake up with her memory intact

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Nice story
Welcome to NuTang! Have fun, see you around. ;)
» Silver-dot- on 2007-06-01 05:49:21

yaya, welcome. ummm... I don't know what browser you use, but in firefox all of your writing is cut off on the left side. Maybe you could try a different layout?
» Chloefoxx on 2007-06-01 05:49:28

welcome to nutang!! there are many interesting people here ^^ and interesting first post XD
» crz4manga on 2007-06-01 11:41:19

I think I already welcomed you in the email with the invite code, but welcome [again] newbie!

I like the story. :)
» randomjunk on 2007-06-02 02:13:33

Thank you!
Thank you all for the welcome and kind comments!

DK Bellefontaine
» CreoleLord on 2007-06-02 09:59:23



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Creole Flavor is just my creative outlet. Hope you enjoy!
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My name is Demetrious Kell Bellefontaine and I love to write. I was born in New Orleans, LA and currently live in Shreveport, LA. I love traveling and have been to Atlanta, DC, Birmingham, Atlantic City, and Paris, France. I love to play my saxophone for Caimon, my pet cat who stood with me when we were trapped in our attic during Katrina. One day, Caimon and I would love to add a wife and kids to the family, but we haven't met the right one yet. Caimon is very picky.

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